Jem_Elle

I like the story so far but I agree that it needs a proper editor. If the one volunteering to check this story’s grammar is willing, I would recommend for the author to let him do so. It is a very interesting plot.

Translation is not good. Maybe more editing before you post the chapters. Good story so far. 👍

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I get confused on the names of characters. Can you just keep the original names if this is a translation?

Awesome! I keep telling myself to stop reading but hey! Can’t do it! Just kept scrolling down. Good job on this story 👌👍

Can’t wait for the wedding and married life of these two! Nice work!

Story is nice and very fast paced. the only problem is the translation. Pls edit and check the sentences properly. Also in the last chapter it says the test showed twin boy and girl but this chapter they dont know the gender so it’s not matching.

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