I cultivate the Dao of Cardiac Arrest.
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I quite liked it at first, the overall development was going well, the pacing was good and the character interactions were something else. BUT the thing I did not like was the character of the MC, like cmon dude get a grip, he is afraid of the power of Alien X just because its too powerful and fears losing control. Never has there been a precedent of a celestialsapien losing control. I mean WHAT IS THIS DUDE EVEN AFRAID OF!!?? Its already great that he gets Alien X after all it directly makes him one of the most powerful beings in Marvel and it is a good protection against cosmic threats BUT this is dude wants to lock it away. I mean tell me what the fak is he going to do when mephisto or the celestials come knocking on his door?? Fight them with the power of friendship?? Well guess what, thats what he been doing all this time, he deals with threats with the power of friendship and plot armour, like the fight with the destroyer armour and Zy'skar. The MC is a wimp and does not think about the future threats, the cosmic dangers and dimensional lords like dormammu. The FIRST RULE OF SURVIVAL IS TO USE EVERY RESOURCE AT YOUR DISPOSAL. The dude clearly does not understand this and acts like a wimp and an idi0t afraid of the one power that can guarantee his and his loved ones safety just cause he is too afraid to man the fuk up.
Classic 'courting death' protag. I don't have much expectations.
This is good but the grammar could use a bit work.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
So now I have to know history to mock ped0s? Wow I didn't know about that. So you mean that ped0s are historically good?
Well your 'beloved' prophet is a ped0.
ok??
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Better not, being a devil is overrated in DxD fics or crossovers.
Lol A Nerf, what more was I even expecting from a noob author.