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can anyone tell me the story,so does the mc unify the continent does he oppose the spirit hall or the empires,what happens at the end.........

2 chapters of complete trash

good, MC doesn't act like most Chinese characters, not an edge lord mc, till now its kinda of a mix of slice of life......................................

As an Indian, it's refreshing to see an Indian perspective on the magical world. It's well written, with no obvious grammar mistakes. I hope your work won't turn out like the Chinese MLTs', and good luck.

bad grammer................................................................................................................................................

Authors English is really bad......................................................................................................................................................................................

i know it is your first fic so i won't blame you but the writing quality is really poor.................................................................

ice emperor, duo po, since it is an old man who can control ice

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