False_Architect

Writing Quality: Okay and there's room for improvement. 💯 Story Development: Interesting... Many mysteries are to be unfolded! 🤔 Character Design: Based on their descriptions, I'd say they're fine guys and gals. ♥️ World Background: Mysteries! At Chapter 96 though, Princess Arianna's a badass! 🔥

There are many things to explore and to unfold, look forward to it.

This may be late, but I republished my work under the new title: Great Labyrinth's Chosen for the WSA 2024 CONTEST. I hope you can support me, thanks! Also, leave a constructive review if possible.

This may be late, but I republished this work with the new title: Great Labyrinth's Chosen because of the WSA Contest. I hope you continue to support it!

Thank you for appreciation. I hope you can leave a review about what you think as your further read. It'll help my book in any way; enjoy reading!

I am not sure yet; it depends on the further development of the story. However, the way I see it right now, though it might change later on, this is a single FL. By the way, enjoy reading and leave a review if possible, thank you!

I would love to have your constructive criticism, enjoy reading!

I appreciate what you are trying to point out and I understand what you mean, but if there's something I can say about this situation, it's that Zero has a use for her. With that said, Zero's current moral state lies on "apathy" that he actually does not care whether Princess Acana atones for her sins. But rather he spared her due to something else, for the future, I'd say.

Character Design [—] PS: There's a typo there. :3 Anyway, I'll left it to you guys, about how my character looks like.

Does Susie perhaps have a human form now? 🤷