JoshLane
Just a random dude in the internet...
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The original name was Ikilux. I don't remember how I got it, though. I changed it since it didn't look like an actual word.
Basically, an everyman is an ordinary and humble character who every reader can relate to
I'm honestly loving it, so far. Although the formatting can be a bit distracting, the story so far is amazing. It's a change of pace from what I usually read where it's usually the ML that's pining for the FL. In here, the FL actually wronged the ML and is trying to make up for it, while the ML has supposedly moved on. Good luck to you, author!
It honestly looks like a manuscript for a show/movie and there are some formatting error, especially with the punctuation marks, but it seems like it's getting better. However, getting past of all that, it really is a story with a lot of potential. It just needs proper formatting, in terms of the punctuation marks, and a proper pacing when introducing characters because I was immediately thrusted into the world without any prior knowledge of who the characters are as persons.
Yeah, I did consider going the harem route, but it wouldn't exactly fit with what I had in mind
Read the next chapter if you want to know what happened to her
"An ordinary and humble character, the everyman is generally a protagonist whose benign conduct fosters the audience's wide identification with him." -Wikipedia