vieweye

Really great overall football fanfic, my only issue is that I want to read more and your Patreon prices are just too expensive, why not just charge monthly?

I liked the earlier suggestions more, someone more famous and that isn’t an athlete to be able to spend more time with him.

This is exactly what I have been looking for, don’t you dare stop this! 5 stars easy.

Change it to like only saints no cringy obsidian

Best football novel I have read yet on this site, really great, love all the slice of life as well keep up this splendid job! Kate is just a keeper!

Why are you focusing so much time to yomi, she feels just like a filler character bc the mc has no one else to talk to. And why must they do everything together at this point it’s like they are one character. And how does she even nearly match out mc in chakra and skills, she is a nobody while out mc is a senju and uchiha, makes no sense. She will probably die to activate our mcs sharingan somewhere later.

I would rather not he figured out anything about his transmigration, he is now in the Naruto world that is fictional so outside of that fictional world there doesn’t exist anything like a universe etc. and it’s impossible to figure out things that maybe a god did for him as he will never reach those heights.

Will she have longer hair later on, seems cooler with a ponytail or smt like that

Great Chapter looking forward to all the next ones

Really great novel tbh, its been steady so far. One thing i just dont like is he having a wolf as a companion, i have never liked Beast taming and stuff, would be much better if that wolf stayed on the island to Guard it or something. Where ever he goes to islands that wolf will never be welcomed.