give us other people's perspectives about the city that Damian founded, such as the first slave that Damian bought, which explains the development of the city from zero to a modern city that is admired by the people of the world.

This rating shows the content of the story, not the translation.... the logic doesn't add up even for me, who has a tolerance for strange arrangements, this story is like making bad bread, like knowing the ingredients for making bread but not knowing the right measurements.

as long as the author doesn't mess up the next chapter, this will be a top danmachi fanfiction.The potential for story development is also very large with fresh and new concepts, the other 5 souls also seem to have brains, are not like cardboard and have real personalities. The preparation of the storyline is quite thorough, and does not contain bland chapters that only increase the number of chapters. Overall I like the story, it's just that I'm a little worried about the chapter update schedule, the author is like someone who writes because he wants to, and can disappear anytime when the desire to write is not there, so apart from the update schedule, I will give 5 stars.

the author disappeared, it may take another year to continue :v

Damian wrote the Warcraft book or this crossover of the Warcraft world

it's a skill of luck

It's like chapters 72 and 73 are reversed in order

the story is flat, I read it in faloo up to 21 chapters... for those of you who have read a lot of danmachi fanfiction like me, maybe you will feel the same... especially this MC is very, very lucky, he got 26 million Vali in His first dungeon dive, and it seems to follow the pattern of other stories where people around him are amazed by the MC. The increase in MC's strength is also very fast, on his first dive he increased his status points by 400 points for each attribute, not to mention that with the 26 million Valis that MC has, MC can use that money to withdraw the gacha system which costs 10,000 Valis per withdrawal. you can imagine the increase in MC in the future will be very fast..... for the translation. Good... but this story may not be for me

In the past, when the broadcast of Boruto had just started, I was very annoyed by the fact that Boruto's behavior towards Naruto was very annoying, so that it crossed my mind "if someone told him about his father's story"... Gradually, I stopped watching the anime, interest in anime and its stories disappeared. many years later or it could also be called today, May 18 2024, I am here, interested in reading Boruto fanfiction because of this book... I am very interested in the reactions of people from the Boruto era to the Naruto story, even though today the MC of this book has not yet drawn manga Naruto, but looking at the system panel which provides the Naruto storyline script is a show of the author... the implementation of the character is good, so you don't mistake it for someone else... I hope you don't stop and disappear the author

MC should at least draw a romance manga, seeing as the previous chapter mentioned Icha Icha as a romance novel, really...

why China calls the earth a blue star

Not enough or too few paragraphs, it makes me dizzy and uncomfortable when reading sentences with long paragraphs

Apakah penulis akan memasuki honkai Star tail dalam cerita??

Selamat kembali!!!

I have read 30 chapters and I think you can just watch the anime. overall the story is almost no different, like you copy and paste with a few small edits without any impact, maybe there is a slight impact but not to the point of disrupting the Canon event.

good translation.....give us the real name..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

She heard that, didn't she?

if the character is oc, don't forget to give us the writer a picture of the girl. I feel like she will be connected to mc

Hopefully Kenshin can see again when he does "that first time"...otherwise how can he explain it accurately to us.

I don't think Kenshin is blind, he just hasn't adapted yet, like playing in the sun and then coming to a darker place, we can't see clearly. So Kenshin's case might be the same, he's too used to seeing souls (4D+ creatures) so he forgets to viewing the material world (3D)