Pengamat_Ketiga

seeing the author wants to update lemon's writing style, i suggest reading the BTTH fanfic: Beginning Strategy Medusa on the web novel chapter 91-93...which i think is one of the peaks of lemon's depiction

I don't understand, where does Tianmeng's female physique come from?....apart from the use of divine energy on Ning Tian in SL 2 which made him a man, only immortal grass level power can make such a gender change.

I don't understand, why does Tianmeng want to be the MC's first ring?...., if this was douluo 2 it would be possible, but this is douluo 1... which Tianmeng has not "seen" humans becoming gods and "bringing" soul beasts to the realm of the gods... the idea of ​​Tianmeng itself becoming a living soul ring came about because tang san revived xiao wu and brought her to the realm of the gods

This is a comfort factor.... I am more comfortable scrolling in a browser because it is smoother, not because of lag, but webnovel does not provide a sensitivity feature for scrolling... besides, I often read fanfiction, which sometimes I don't know the appearance and shape of the side characters. The browser feature makes it easier for me to search for character images, so I think the browser is better than the direct application.

good translation, this is not only well done but also well edited... for example in the first chapter when the system first came and MC asked for limitless and six eyes which MC actually didn't ask for that, MC asked for pangu blood (god) but the translator changed it to something that most people in different countries can understand.... and for the storyline, I'm quite disappointed with the original author, even though I quite like other works from this author (btth: Element god)..... the beginning of the story is still very good, but then the check in system starts to mess up, this system gives a sacred power as strong as Haotian out of thin air and integrates it as if it had existed thousands of years ago and it is 100% loyal to the mc. then the system gives a summoning card which finally summons hai bodong from btth whose brain was brainwashed by the system to be very loyal to the mc..... I don't like the storyline but that doesn't mean the interaction between the characters is bad, actually this is quite good compared to other Chinese fanfics

I once read somewhere, a Korean novel where the MC is crazy about trpg until when he reincarnated he created a really perfect illusion so that it could be called a second world or a full immersion VR game.... imagine if the illusion was used as a combat training tool for the young generation... this could be a revolutionary training tool

the third box is basically the power of caped baldy

thanks for the chapter

The author belittles the level 6 alchemist in this chapter. Objectively speaking, Hai Bodong shouldn't have acted like that. It would be more likely for the clans and royal families to offer their daughters and granddaughters to the MC for marriage, not to mention a Dou Spirit with the MC's age being less than 15 years old. That would already be the number one genius in the Jia Ma Empire.

that won't happen.only trucks have that capability