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I've read the first chapters...what can I say? Although there are some errors in translation sometimes, but that did not prevent me from enjoying, do not fall, continue please

I liked the mystery in the story, and the background of the world as well..The annoying thing here is that you mixed the point of view of the first character with the point of view of the second character..that brings some confusion while reading, but I liked the rest of the aspects, By speeding up the pace of publishing, that would be great

Hmm my understanding is that Isaac turned into a super Saiyan....

The chapter is Too long, and there's a lot of useless information (just filler)

It is normal for the main character's feelings to be surprised or afraid when he finds that he has reincarnated. This reaction is not convincing for me as a reader. It is better to amend the chapter and add more feelings.

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ok ok i'm the author, first of all thanks for your helpful comment which is really clear and helps me, like i said, i'll try to give the hero what i can give him, but now he's still in the process of being evolving, he can't do much and he can't Getting something like this (for now), at least will happen if he go deeper into the outside world, and of course the Astral-eyes Analyzer path would be excellent despite its reputation and I'll dedicate a few chapters to talking about this path and other users of it.