Hardly any mispells or grammar mistakes. 5/5 Updates once per day (if I remember correctly) 5/5 Story moves really fast. It goes from like each arc to another and there aren’t that many overarching plot points. He had the clones which he resolves in a few chapters, Kang (which he literally stopped in like 3 sentences), and I guess making a safe space for mutants to excel in is his goal. 2/5 Some characters are very mischaracterized. Obviously you have Emma Frost acting way out of character but others I feel like you either hit or missed. Most of the big Avengers/Avengers related characters hate him, though I’m not really sure why. I can understand why Tony or Nick Fury would be suspicious of him but not really Reed (maybe MC fucked Susan? i have no idea why reed hates the MC) or Hank (might’ve been because he fucked Janet. Don’t remember why). MC is also very clear. I feel like he’s an ends justify the means kind of character but he still has morals. He isn’t conflicted on killing villains/henchmen but in one of the chapters during the Dark Olympian arc he does get conflicted over killing 50 billion people (very understandable). He later explains in the next chapter that he is fine with killing villains but not henchmen/good people. MC is also powerhungry and (atleast for Emma) is willing to do anything for his loved one’s happiness or to just eliminate a threat to his loved one. 3/5 Word background is Marvel and the author does explore around. MC goes to the Asgardians, X-men, Inhumans, Olympians, and the Avengers just to name a few. 5/5

what happened to galatea?

The writing quality is great, with there being hardly any spelling errors or grammar mistakes. The Updating Stability is great with there being I believe 2 chaps per day. The story development is more so just us watching as the MC becomes a god until his wife dies where it turns into the MC trying to revive his wife. There isn’t really any overarching plot being set up, it’s mostly just the MC popping into a world, killing the villains/threats, getting upgrades, and then off to the next world The start was really good, with the MC being realistic. He was conflicted with killing but we see him start to ease in more after he erases Rick from his head. The MC is very power hungry, it kind of feels like he’ll do anything for power but it changes on after his wife dies. His motive for power was mostly just survive and become God, which makes sense but isn’t really that good of a motive. However after his wife dies it becomes clear that his motives changed to revive wife, protect family, and become God. We can really see his motivation in protecting his family when he literally fights Death just to ensure the survival of his kids. The romance is pretty good and made me feel genuinely sad during his wife’s death and when he broke up with his girlfriend. The author also explores develops other characters from different series pretty well. World backgrounds are mostly just different worlds but expanded upon. Things like showing omniscient beings full capabilities to name a bit.

I prefer this over the first version but it feels a bit weird in the transition. Also I feel like Paige is gonna try (fail) to invent some multiverse travel to visit the MC

ah thanks for clearing that up

what was the explanation for the drawing part (unless its the part where he can get the movies from the system)?

shit hits the fan hard. like after the tony grabs all the infinity stones it kind of feels like a fever dream. i dont know nor get half the shit thats happening and its still entertaining as hell. sadly dropped and dropped at a bad time

is this dropped or did the author just dissapear (last activity was 2 months ago)?

There are a lot of minor grammar/spelling issues that pile up. Like spaces inbetween quotation marks, whatever these “¡” are, missing punctuation, improper capitalization (might have made a new line instead of pressing space on some of the sentences), and the fact that the sentences feel robotic and translated. Also MC is fine with killing (though they were maybe all devils who were assholes) but draws the line at mind control.

I liked the fanfic. It was pretty good and most of it was just Loki gets stronger, fucks someone, then goofs around. It was pretty nice. 140

I can’t wait until he uses his power but some BS comes up like “oh my power might accidentaly harm Yasaka and crew because they’re nearby” and the fight stretches out for another 50 chapters

stop nerfing him

stop making the mc hold back 🤮

It’s pretty funny. The MC is kinda weird though. He doesn’t feel guilty over killing like probably millions (tbf most were all HYDRA) but draws the line at mind control. The introduction of his adopted child was also pretty weird, it kind of felt like she was just there to nerf the MC but she ended up becoming a pretty good character afterwards.

Is Gabriel a fallen?

why did he send her to tony stark though? i dont think she would even be able to meet him or she might get arrested or something for being in possession of the cats eye

The start was kind of weird since he drew all of the Lion King (or maybe it was a rough animatic?) in 15 days. It was never mentioned that he was an artist or atleast good at art in his last life nor did it explain how he remembered all of the Lion King. It’s (maybe?) explained later because he can buy the original stories but it was never mentioned in the beginning. The MC also makes some kind of dumb decisions. He could, instead of fighting on the frontlines, be just commanding his summons but I guess that’s just his preference. He also told SHIELD about his powers (for no reason explained) but BS’d about it being alternate worlds merging with the universe which I guess is fine. The grammar is fine but it kinda throwa me off at some points (like it feels like a polished Chinese novel at some points) and there are hardly any spelling mistakes. The plot is pretty slow with the MC releasing movies and most of the MCU movies being done in a few chapters (which is nice). Writing Quality 3/5 Updating Stability 5/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 3/5 World Background 5/5

this is like a crackfic except its on crack and then crashed into a vat of acids, became joker, got drunk, then overdosed and died. then he got reincarnated and did the exact same thing except he reached the maximum output possible.

Thanks for the chapter. Also very nice tone down from the usual noble phantasm fusion spam

The MC started off active then went passive really HARD. Man was getting dragged by the plot until his fight with Doomsday where he realized a higher power was at play (later on revealed to be Dr. Manhattan). Then he became really active, with a few sudden events happening here and there (Crisis on Infinite Earths, Flashpoint, etc.) but he wasn’t being dragged by the plot as much. Epilogue was pretty much a post-credit scene so that’s nice but it was a pretty good ending. Writing Quality 3/5 Updating Stability 5/5 (cuz it’s finished as I’m reading this) Story Development 3/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background 5/5