This novel was good it has a lot of potential to go far the plot twist and the store line was good but there is room for improvement try branching out your vocabulary a little but otherwise the novel was good

You're novels are good but you keep using the same story lines the typical villain and saves the heroin and falls in loves it happens all the time try to branch out into new territory and open you're vocabulary too not to much but in a while that it doesn't seem boring but still understand it but I think you can do better than this tho

It wasn't too bad ,it was interesting But had miner mistakes you'll see for yourself when you read it. The person who wrote this has alot ideas and plans and so much more so he had all of that bottled up so that person is just putting all that pent up energy in one place instead of leaving suspense in my suspective

The novel was interesting and has potential but it has to much to much detail I think you need some one with experience to help you because you are clearly see you're a beginner you just need to practice more and you'll reach there.Good luck on your journey

The novel was interesting and has potential but it has to much to much detail I think you need some one with experience to help you because you can clearly see you're a beginner you just need to practice more and you'll reach good luck on your journey