the whole 5.0 star while not even being my favorite of your fics just to say I miss ya dude. I am getting tired of reading all this crybabies and offended witches with that whole" like" "omg" crap. if ya ever write again may be do a self insert Peter Parker or midoriya and completely destroy their patron creators, cause jordino's Peter won't be spiderman the whipping boy of marvel or deku the submissive extream stockholm syndrome. word vomit.

is the mc aware about wells?

why's this fic so long and boring dude. you have amazing pokemon, fight scenes, and a strong mc but still you somehow make it feel stale and listless.

did you add her? or is there a black widow copy in DC?

like I already said the best version after the previous too. though I personally dislike party system you're making it work from the first view.

last time you ruined it with the mage or something taking over naruto cause he let him have free reign. and you tried the anbu angle three times already maybe it's time you go the traditional route. since you know he has much better connection with the other characters than the previous two times. and he seems more normal than the last times juiced up monkey. I like this version the most.

kinda giving me the short immortal white haired elf with emotional issues vibes mixed with magical gojo. love it. keep it up.

the previous chapter didn't make sense? the mc isn't a kid that got reincarnated he was an adult in a child's body with knowledge of the setting and his father's character. seems a bit weird that he would want to seek his father's approval and follow in is footsteps.

dude what's going on. this fics been weird since the beginning. average dc experience was great. one of the best fic here but then the quality dropped with Cedric strode and marvelous twist and this. it's the narrating style. dude. it feels like a translation novel.

so you didn't read the description that you wrote yourself. that's the problem with flighty mc's. dudes just roleplaying his weeb fantasies.

do you have the spirit to keep writing? to update the ones you have forgotten?

it is. but that's fanfic for ya. we can't write decently so we gotta read stuff from the writers pov with his own preferences. sometimes they are good though very rarely and most times they have psychological issues or wierd kinks and fetishes.

you have magical durability , riddler doesn't. use your surrounding instead of getting in a slug fest. being theatrical is alright but being half cocked is bad. should have broken his hands or legs or aimed to break him from the start. dc as you know, that the villains never fear or hesitate to fight the heroes because they are confident that they will be the one trying to crush the heroes and not the other way around.

huh? ?

why would you comply to be chained. or go out of your cell. you're a mercenary you don't have pride or morals.

he won't. . the authors have a habit of stockholm Syndrome. just read all the fics with the league of Assassines where the mc after getting tortured becomes a part of it or wants to be a leader.

so "the end" then? ?maybe another new one in a year or two!

just a thought but i have really been wanting to read a fic Centering around the punisher of marvel or someone that molds Himself akin to the punisher. maybe an si into punisher with a simple power or system or just and alternate punisher that gets a power or skill.