It looks to be a good book just to many problems. Nobles adopting random people for one not consummating the marriage afterwards for another. And that’s in just the first chapter or two. He gets bossed around or seems to be giving power to his wife and getting rid of his others as well. Women have to much freedom for the background of the story as nobles etc. the way it was set up though it looked like it would be a great story but the author knows nothing of nobles or those in power and how they act etc. there also isn’t really divorces for nobles like he is trying to do there is only one way out and that is the women sleeping with another man or something like that and getting executed. But ya his wife disrespects him constantly and it seems he fell in love with her in a glance.

Yep completely agree with that. Or at the very least looked up what genius people are like as well because they are also arrogant and you can look at any genius in history to be able to see that. He just did no research and completely messed up what someone like the mc would be.

Ya so the author decided that the mc doesn’t want to be king but can’t find any reasons for it almost like he is trying to keep the plot as similar to canon as possible which is mostly true as well as he has an intrest in lagetha but refuses to go after her until the other women shows up and she loses verything. He also has a huge intrest in lagetha even after acknowledging she was to arrogant etc. he is also trying to make her out to being one of the best warriors they have when she isn’t even close. In the show she was only good not great at combat as were any shield maidens. Also when a lot of people pointed out that he wants to conquer the world but in his brothers name and his brothers descendents and how they didn’t like that instead of giving reasons asked why he should. When I did tell him why he told me “go away Mufasa” I can now see why so many dropped it as I was looking forward to his stories but from them it seems he hates making his MCs king in medieval eras for no reason.

Don’t worry I did as did most of your readers

That is an outright lie he is extremely good looking in the books and it points it out multiple times. The thing is most of what we see of Jon he is with all men of the nights watch or wildlings who care little for looks but even say he is beutiful and handsome. Robb we barely see complimented on his looks and only then it’s as handsome and you forget Jon is nearly a year younger then bob so hasn’t grown as much yet and is tall himself in the books. So you ignore a lot of the stuff about the books including the fact that the south actually does gossip about the good looking people in the realm and very few have seen Jon or would compliment him with his bastard status.

So far no he doesn’t want to be king but wants to help others be king.

You haven’t really given an explanation you just say because and then don’t give a reason. It’s better to be king as there is no one you answer to plus people are more willing to follow you. Also there isn’t a single thing that is not beneficial about being king it’s why you haven’t been able to give a reason.

The velaryons aren’t black either that’s just in the show.

Wrong the U.S. measures up untill 5’12 not 11i live there I also spent some time in the uk and know a ton of people from there they don’t use both systems. Don’t lie if it doesn’t even have some truth in it at least. Cant just say wrong then make claims that are easy to prove wrong especially because they can be researched.

Sorry I do a lot of longe messages for some reason it’s just starts coming out and I keep writing.

Danny doesn’t have ny of those abilities a witch made a ritual that revived them and gave dany immunity during the ritual only

It’s a very good story from what I’ve read with great writing. Sadly the mistakes were to big and many for me to keep reading but that is only because of the lack of realism in the novel I think those that can get around that would love the book and do recommend it to them. Now onto why I can’t keep reading it sadly. First off the child has his mothers last name which wouldn’t happen unless she was a prostitute or someone who has slept with a random person other than that his should have his fathers as at this time only when you don’t know the fathers name do you give him his mothers last name. Secondly they are a wealthy family but don’t act like it but more like a modern one. This is one of the two or three major problems I had with it. He had to ask his grandfather for tutoring when a wealthy family would have started it at probably five on their own. He then gets a random servents son who trespassed on his private tree house sort of like just doing what you want in someone’s room which servents can’t do never the less their children. The grandfather then asks the servant if her child could learn with his son which would not be allowed and wouldn’t ask her as she is a women and for this time period their opinion doesn’t matter at all. The MC is already placing his modern ideals into the story with no repercussions and in an unrealistic way. The mother is still unmarried which would be realistic if she had a child outside marriage normally but they are a wealthy family so would be able to find a less wealthy family to marry her into but doesn’t. Also the granfather doesn’t look for any betrothals for his grandson who would be his heir which is also unrealistic as at age 16 you are expected to have your first child and they are an influential family so they should already look for one in other families for connections or just of equal wealth for relations between the families and so they don’t have to marry into lesser families. All in all other than the unrealism it’s a great novel that I would recommend if you can get around that.

Ya and this is how you lose those who want realism he grew up again in this time and would be closer to it. Blaming kings while under a monarchy is dumb and there is very little hate between the colonies and the crown at this moment most is actually favorable it isn’t until they try to tax the, heavily without and form of representation after the Indian war that the hate starts. You do have a good novel though so good luck just a heads up on this as a lot of people looking for this type of novel prefer accuracy and realism good luck though.

It would be his father he has to get to agree not the mother. This is a major complaint I always have when people do historical fanfics or novels. Women do not have a say in how a household is run or what people in said household can do. This is all up to the patriarch of the family or the men never the women. If his father is dead it goes to an uncle causin or some other teen family member. At around 13 you can start to make your own descisions as a man. Please don’t try to change this it wouldn’t work or be possible in any way and I get it’s alternate history but this wouldn’t happen in any alternate history. If he has no adult or older male in his family it’s up to himself as he would be the one supporting the family, females can not work right now or for a while still for a multitude of reasons so can not support a family either so if his father is dead all his fathers wealth goes to him not the mother. Just like the MCs grandfathers stuff would all go to the MC when he does die and he would probably be given something to get used to running in a bit at say 16. His grandfather would look for betrothals for him too sense he was a child to further his own buisness and connections. So the grandfather should start if he hasn’t already looking for a betrothel so his son can also get married at about 16 when they are expected to have their first child this was still like this in the US up until around 40 years ago. And the granfather would look for influential and wealthy families maybe even a noble family as they are still part of the British empire and would be British themselves. And please don’t even try to push modern ideals I know stuff like slavery sucks but one guy can not change it it takes time and a society has to be developed enough to end it. It’s why undeveloped countries do it still to this day even when other countries try to end it forcefully. And pushing modern ideals is garuanteed to get the mc killed or lose everything including friends who grew up in this just like the MC is as well like you said the MC died young so by the time he has finished his childhood he died so him as a chield in this world would be considered the beginning of his adult like or where he learns more about society and gets his ideals. Sorry for this rant just take it as advice please I’ve seen to many authors push modern ideals in a historical setting or being outliers who treat women differently or something or don’t do something everyone else rich is doing when in reality it would get them killed or disliked.

Ya but there will be more people from the ship coming down in the future plus others already on the ground. And repopulation only requires a male and many females the amount of men doesn’t matter too much it’s a major reason people had multiple wives or servants they slept with. Men are more likely to be born but also to die sooner from many things especially for less technological times like war sickness assassinations and hunting personal grudges etc. plus doing dumb stuff or work accidents. So taking a few women has been fine for most of human history to have children and benefited from it in faster population growth to as those with more wives were stronger and wealthier meaning a healthier gene likely to be passed down and less sicknesses. Plus being able to support more children rather than someone with some small farmland having it go to his eldest son and his sons family. Where as a more wealthy or stronger one have there children more opportunity’s second and third sons being able to inherit some while more than half still goes to the eldest and daughters being able to be married into wealthier families who were able to give her a better life than someone’s daughter from a pore family would get

None of what you said makes sense and you counter yourself within it. You are also trying to talk about how other countries measure feat ignoring that it is the US that does.

Yes but only as they are considered a part of the Iranian ethnic group you can search this up they are a type of Iranians or a group of them. And an ethnic religion means they consider themselves as a group of people not what you are trying to make it.

No one will give to much of any company to one person if they can help it as a few holding a big portion can controll the company. Keep yourself as the only large one or one of 2 and it’s a lot harder

Hard to speculate as the worth of money changed plus the war and he is just becoming popular.

No they aren’t Jews are a religious ethnicity not an actual ethnicity there is a difference search it up and the Jewism thing was n accident I meant to spell Jew. There is no Jewish ethnicity as it’s the country you descend from and the country has to still be standing. You don’t see people calling themselves Roman even though they live in Italy they are Italians as it’s the country they descend from that is still standing.