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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ah that makes much more sense then. thanks!

seems like the paragraph wasn't completed properly?

"in my space"? and this in a sentence spoken to her godmother? i thought she's not going to tell anyone other than Lu Hanmo and maybe the Luo's (I mean the medicinal gods who actually inherit space abilities like her, not her siblings ) about it?

did she actually say this out loud to the female lead?

wait just her brother and her? what about her sister luo shan?

I've read up until Ch 9, and I just cannot continue, unfortunately. There's too many inconsistencies, the characters all behave like they have no basic courtesy and common sense and even the house where they're living in makes no sense. More research should have been made into the worldbuilding and characters behaviours. That said, the author is good at writing, no major grammatical errors and sentences do flow nicely. Just the storytelling needs more work. I'm sorry if I come across too harsh though, maybe I'm just getting older and less patient but this book is just not for me.

a cub, huh. right. he did say you can call it a cat .. somewhat.

I like author's logics behind how the FL's classmates behaved and how the FL is planning to cope with life after her rebirth. Plot progresses rather slow though, 23 chapters in and nothing significant really happened as of yet.

can you share the raw name in English please?