KleiNightwriter
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KleiNightwriter3 years agoBerkomentar*Got into a fight Not get, the grammar matters when it comes to statements of context.
- KleiNightwriter3 years agoBerkomentar
If you're going to describe a character, add a comma. For example... Jonathan Preston, the ex-FSU... You feel me?
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Also it's "a lab leak", to lessen confusion with the grammar.
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Make it a bit more formal by saying "one" instead of 1, depending on the statement.
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Make sure the 'titled' "Scorching Virus" has capital letters in the first character of the two words. So it won't confuse the readers.
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*that can make the human body burn It's not a past statement, so it should be burn, and not burnt. Because it's in present statement.
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The story was well written, barely any grammatical errors. The plot is amazing. It's not like any other war/military story, it gives encouragement, overpowerment, and motivational inspiration to those who want to have a good time feeling ecstatic to the readers viewing your book!
- KleiNightwriter3 years agoBerkomentar
It should be "Blood for blood, kin for kin" add a coma. If you want you can always go check out Punctuation Checker when manually editing. It works better than Grammarly, just click look up than deep look up. It's very simple yet the most useful.
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Read further when I publish future updates which will be every 9 AM in (GMT+8) Timezone. , the main theme of the story isn't sci-fi, it's a pilot volume which means it's not canon but they are connected to the rest of the other 5 future volumes, soon. Spoilers, the main plot of the novel in the second volume is about a vampire with a psychological disorder and can infect his insanity to other people.
- KleiNightwriter3 years agoBalas CHRIS2169XP
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