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I haven't read it and planning to read it so don't mind my review. Author I wanted to ask a Q, is it main timeline or different timeline that MC is in. I asked the question because I wanted protagonist and heroines suffer in front of MC knowing what they did to him while he was innocent.
You guys should know, that there are many novels like this one. And MC he thought he returned to the past. wake up stupid MCs. You're in different timeline, not in your main timeline. They become strong enough to have revenge but, they never got their real revenge.
You know, You could have made Jayden the main protagonist, and you may have made MC the otherworlder. Or you could have made MC an Anti-hero. You know Your story has lot's of potential. You should write another version of it, it will be very interesting. And thank you for viewing my comments it me very happy know my comments pass on to you. Bye 👋
Sorry to say this but, I quit. MC is an simp & wingman nothing more. While reading this till ch 37, I got so angry that I came here to post my review.