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finally, a ship with sense, not those weird kenjussy guys and the fuyoshis with gojo.
If he enters the fourth dimension he could cross Gojo's infinity, because Gojo's infinity is a three-dimensional space.
The only bad thing about Uraume dying is that now he won't be able to see Sukuna humiliated.
nerdy entp 5w4 who tries to find the most autistic way of explaining something to seem interesting although it could be approached in an easier way, that's Gege.
"fighting skills", let the brother then adapt to being a kind of Alexander Karelin, Jon Jones and Mike Tyson no cap
literally attack from a higher dimension, since, although infinite, gojo's space is three-dimensional
pokes in the eyes, spinning elbows and oblique kicks are a foolproof trick [img=recommend]
kenichi generation*
The story would have been more interesting if he had not been the only one reincarnated, let him be another MC of the generation and then we are talking about a more interesting dynamic.
great creativity when adding crossover elements. good development of the story although I fear that this will overwhelm the author in the future, and in general good quality of writing, as always the beginning is slow until the parts of taming the shadows arrive and how the MC interacts with the world. the establishment of the world and the political conflicts are also something to be appreciated, I just hope that the author in the future has the courage to change events, it's kind of boring when the MCs stay in line with the canon
Well, having seen everything so far, there are a couple of considerations that I want to tell you. First of all, this is a great idea of what a creative fanfiction crossover should be and without exaggerating anything, even more so when it is accompanied with such creativity to develop the plot I applaud you for that this is currently the best Naruto fanfiction crossover on air that I have read, I just hope it stays on air, it is very difficult to keep up with the pace, I know that, I see that you are including even things that are not canon in Naruto, I just hope that does not overwhelm you, so far the transmigration novel of Kakashi was able to support the pace by including non-canon elements, but as you can see there were several chapters. The considerations that I would like to see are solving mysteries that the series or Kishimoto did not show, such as Hidan's god and things like that, it would be great if you invented something along the way, elements like the weapons of the sage, etc. I also see a lot that you are waiting for some things that Gege resolves, such as the complete domain expansion of the 10, shadows or the shadow of the tiger, which is the one that is missing, although I think you should take the risk anyway, it could give you an idea of the tiger's shadow abilities, such as it could revive the fallen Shikigami with certain conditions, the 10 shadows would become similar to the 6 paths of pain, which is great because Pain is one of the characters that I liked as a use a Kekkei Genkai as versatile as the rinnegan. and some ideas on how you could tame Mahoraga, think of the elephant that accumulates damage by falling or the ox that accumulates damage by traveling, why not make a giant rodent wheel or a highway for the ox to accumulate damage and deal one shot Mahoraga before he adapts like the elephant, I don't know why Megumi never thought of this, but it seems that you have the limitation that for every minute that passes the shadows deplete your chakra, those are inconveniences that you could solve, I just wanted to give you that idea.
renewal taekwondo could be said to be one of the most formidable martial arts in fiction, it would enter the top 10, but it is nothing if it were not for its bearer... Mori Jin, for me, the GOAT of martial arts in all fiction, using his martial art is a tribute to him above all
Naruhodo...It would be interesting to know how far you want to finish the story, if it were up to me I would barely go 15% and 50% is when we start talking about his offspring, honestly this was pretty good man, I smoked it in about 2 days lel. Oh merry christmas BTW