NakamuraGT

Fun book so far, enjoying the frequent updates, but will probably wait until theres more released ---

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

Spooky

Fun and intriguing start from what I've read so far. Enjoying the pace and the path the story is going // a real, dark Armageddon situation

This has to be a troll, right? What are you talking about with there not being limitations and the MC just using loopholes? For one, that would mean there are limits and the MC is just doing his best to work around them. Besides that, there are *HARD* limits on the system, established early on -- did you read the story? He can't just hypnotize whoever, or make them do whatever. It is intrinsically tied to his own strength relative to his target's own. Like, make it make sense please. Anyway, most of this review is incoherent rambling, so I'm going to delete it. I'll take critique seriously if you actually give it thought and don't just spew bullshit at me.

Thanks for the support! I can guarantee you it will be updated daily !

Undead Martial Hero isn't a particularly special or unique being...It's an amalgamation of adventurers who failed within Emerald Mountain. So the contents of its strength are less than Blake.

Same body, but essentially it's been put into better condition.