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Just from reading the chapters that there are, I can tell this is going to be an amazing story. The grammar is impeccable, the background info does a great job explaining everything that needs to be known, and the descriptions of the characters is so detailed. I really enjoy the detail put into every line of this book. I can't wait for more updates.

I think that this story definitely has potential, but the way it is structured could have been better. It jumped straight into the main character talking to their system without any background info which leaves me with confusion on what is happening.