Sir_Stronghold
Aspiring writer. I hope you enjoy what I write and thank you for any advice.
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Like this comment if you agree with with Aunt May in in the harem.
how long is he gonna hide his abilities? I hope not long.
"I dont need no man." before 30 "Why cant I find a man?!" after 30
I would not have ate that devil fruit. its helpful sure but unless he is allowed to eat more than one I would have waited for a better one.
idk man his dialogue kinda coming out cringey. too direct can also be a bad thing. it's like he doesnt have a filter on what he says so far. the story has just started so I hope he tones ot down a bit.
kryptonite spread around the galaxy so good luck with that.
please dont go there...
Martha is average in looks...
Doom starts adopting kids like Whitebeard is a funny idea to me.
gen 2. that was in the early 2000's
"Listen up maggots!"
DC hasThe Bat Who Laughs...