Renee_Writes
I just love reading and writing books. IG handle: symplyreneetiktok handle: Facebook: Renée Writes Also Cammie ReneWattpad handle: AmakaFlorenzWhatsapp: 2349038134854
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Renee_Writes1dBalas MissBlackRoseCh 1 The Proposal- Renee_Writes2dBerkomentarCh 13 Dé Jà Vu or Day Dream?
- Renee_Writes2dBerkomentarCh 3 THE NEW ME
- Renee_Writes6dBalas MAXandMILLSCh -1 Just For You
- Renee_Writes6dBerkomentarCh -1 Just For You
- Renee_Writes6dBerkomentarCh 11 Shawn
- Renee_Writes8dBalas vecii
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- Renee_Writes16dBerkomentarCh 9 Our moms
- Renee_Writes22dDiterbitkan
I, personally would give my book a 4.8 star rating because I've to support myself as well. I know how much I've dedicated to shaping the characters, ensuring my book is void of grammatical errors and I know for sure that this book would be a blast. spoiler alert; there's a secret, one neither of you see coming. What you expect to happen, might not be what would happen. A very dark secret accompanied with a favor. what would someone who has it all, really want from someone who also has it all?
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okay**
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - Renee_Writes1mthBalas MAXandMILLS
lol okuay
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repitition*
Yet no one was to ever find out about what Sandra had done because it was despicable and unworthy to be heard. At work everyone had been trying to work so hard on their biggest production so far but no one would have believed that the reason why they suddenly let Sandra take the female lead role was due to the fact that she gave her body for it. - Renee_Writes1yrBerkomentar
At this juncture, explanation is a lot. You can summarize all your explanations in a sentence, get to the bottom line of your story or readers would drop your book. Get to the dialogue, get to what's currently happening. Your book is written in past tense and 3rd person pov, i.e the (he, she, them, we, they, their), now continue in past tense, maintain your tense and the POV. if you're mixing povs, make sure you don't make it too much and mix only one POV with this one, like first POV would do. i.e (I, myself) but I suggest you remain in 3rd POV, mixing povs isn't easy but get to the bottom line of your story. if you keep giving a lot of explanations with zero dialogue and it's not getting to the point of the book, readers would eventually drop your book
But time passed by and Sandra kept going for surgeries with the claim that she was okay and nothing was wrong but sources claimed that she had over stepped her boundaries in undergoing surgeries and even went as far as bribing the doctors to keep it a secret. - Renee_Writes1yrBerkomentar
long been in the business. (then you can bring in the part of her losing to Winter, but make it brief so you can get to the bottom line of your book, or readers won't pick it up)
Sandra was Kyle's lover and girlfriend but ever since Kyle joined her in the industry due to his unique physique people regarded more respect to him than they gave to her despite the fact that she had long been in this business even before Kyle and Winter but now she was gradually loosing her fame to Winter because she was loosing her beauty and youth faster than everyone had predicted while Winter was just as outstanding as an angel with sleek smooth and fair skin that fits a queen, long straight legs and excellent curves. - Renee_Writes1yrBerkomentar
that she had long been in the business. The others that come after it isn't relevant.
Sandra was Kyle's lover and girlfriend but ever since Kyle joined her in the industry due to his unique physique people regarded more respect to him than they gave to her despite the fact that she had long been in this business even before Kyle and Winter but now she was gradually loosing her fame to Winter because she was loosing her beauty and youth faster than everyone had predicted while Winter was just as outstanding as an angel with sleek smooth and fair skin that fits a queen, long straight legs and excellent curves.