Tabs_Kebriel
just trying to write and have fun.
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You'll see :DDD
I apologize, but I've decided to stop working on it. The writing and plot don't seem to meet my expectations and my new standards, and it feels like something a naive 12-year-old would write. Don't worry, in my new story, I've already decided to incorporate crime organization building in here, it's one of the many things I will include that would help the mc's rise to power. But the pacing is a bit slow, so it's going to be a long time before you'll see some exciting stuff.
done!
Author here! shamelessly writing a review on his own book. ANYWAY, after my 'hibernation', I'm finally back.. back with new ideas, inspiration, and motivation... which led me in writing this story. I know I made a lot of incomplete stories before... BUT I SWEAR TO GOD I'M NOT GOING TO DISAPPOINT YOU IN THIS ONE. I PROMISE. I already have an entire plot planned before I even wrote the prologue.. so no chance on me dropping everything. So if you have any questions, feel free to ask!!
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What do u think?
Poor Atticus, overestimating himself like that, hopefully he wont make the same mistake in the future.Anyway, i must say after reading the first chapter, this book has some potential, I love how everything is detailed, but i think it still needs a lot of improvements, the mc must use its 5 senses to describe its surroundings, sight, touch, smell, auditory, etc² anyway keep up the good work!!
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