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I say a divider should be here like three asterisks or whatever, it feels liek there is no mental transition effect of there are none
A little bit edgy, but I suggest "Naruto: The Crimson Waves" if he/she is from the Bloody Mist
Hey, just when I thought! But it's democracy, so carry on
Ah, finally, a fanfic about Sakura that tackled all of that wasted potential and did not slandered any characters at the first chapter, please continue
I suggest not giving the name of the event, it will be a major spoiler before the said event even starts, let the thoughts of the mc or even Naruto's opening dialogue the one to reveal the event.
"Aight Homura mah friend, I feel like destroying some armies over the Kiri front, can you do this for me while I was gone?" -Hiruzen Probabaky
I suggest that the inner gate capabilities to be removed and moved on a relatively distant future, because that would waste the premise of not being Tsunade 2.0 if from the start, she's alrady far away from being her, instead I suggest focusing on genjutsu capability while not removing the influence of might guy and make a friendly rivalry between her and lee instead, however this is just a suggestion, I will still be here for the long haul wether you adhere to it or not
Being named Fred in your first life and then Sakura in the second must have been a tough pill to swallow
I am here once again to ambush devilhex sensei with a question, what are your sources with the jutsus earlier in you fic (also, if it's not too much, can you provide the link?)
Well kage means shadow, soo