Skylar

cosmo

Eclipsia

cupid's dress

I would like to know your thought as well

for my first story on here there's thing here and there that I don't like but it isn't entirely bad and there's a lot of twist and turns and I didn't expect I had one-way things were going to go and ended up changing it and there was one chapter that was supposed to be there but for some reason it disappeared so if you're wondering if you missed a chapter that's the reason and there is the same theme with their lover hurting them and them forgiving them because they love them and it does kind of get annoying but they both love each other and that's how it is and they both become better also remember fate is not what it seems

you're not entirely wrong

thank you and it will definitely not turn out the way you think

no promblem

I was very interested in the story it was a good read and I enjoyed Shane/Nate not being as bad as he was made to seem I would like to see that develop more and I feel like Mrs. Thompson knows who he is and fake fainted to save him maybe she's like uncover or something? anyway loved the story and hope to see more

it's a really great story and I was hooked I would love to read more of it and I like the characters and the world-building and the dungeon battles and you should continue writing

it's a really good story it's very detailed and builds up character I love the characters and the creativity and I think you should continue writting

this is Tetsuya