Boundary_7272
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'As if thinking of something' I'm not sure what it's supposed to mean.
How many times is he going to drop to his knees? I understand that the situation is physically taxing.
Isn't Ty sitting down?
Does Ty know that the table is made from mahogany or??
I can respect your life experience. Now I understand your thought process.
I'm not confused by whose height is whose. What staggering me is the height difference.
Isn't Ty 6' 2"?
This is a lot of hand holding.
Author-san likes to say 'specific location' can you elaborate why?
Location, location, location. This paragraph needs to be reworked.