ZoroTraineeWriter

I really like your old style of writing. Your old writing feel natural, this kind of writing even a bit longer just metaphore.

Thank you for your comment

That is why i said i will frequently release this fanfic for a whole month But if the reader count are still low i will end it fast with an ending But if there are many who like this fiction then i might lengthen it

Thank you, i saved your suggestion

Dont worry 3 chapter left then he will return back

If I become MC, I will suggest them using transformation jutsu and going around the village while spreading it in restaurant For example, Obito, Rin, Kakashi and MC disguised themself as civillian who are in gossip. "How can secret mission be leaked about" "I know why? This mission is doomed to be failed" "Third Hokage wanted to keep his position but with White Fang fame, he wanted to tarnish his name so he can keep the position" "No way, third hokage is a hokage" "Are you idiot, the secret mission are only be known by him so how can he spread it to others except it was deliberatedly spread by him so he can hold the position of hokage" "If hokage is innocent, he must step down" "Why he must step down?" "Why not, we have 3 sannin and also white fang and there are dozen of capable shinobi" Then the public pressure will push hokage

Some story need your brain to shut off because i was diverted from originak storyline. Which it happen because i got confused

Because those are two different universe, harry potter and hogwsrts legacy are two different movie. Its more logical dudley body were controlled rather than he got twice power Btw its up to you, if you wanted to read dudley from first year you can go write it yourself rather than complaining the free book

You are wrong, the story start at 5th year is because im following the game. There are so much potential, such as Dudley parents reaction and so much more but the only reason i skipped because of the games. Only those who are not in right mind would skip the potential of the plot

You need to wait around 5 chapters before back to the main storyline