FanFicReader_101

Huh I never knew that I thought it meant both, learn something new everyday

Smart it’s something I see I spy doing if anything I do feel like he would still be looking for a weakness he can exploit tho since he’s a spy and all

Thanks for the chapter

Nah it ain’t a translation

You shouldve had isagi be the one eliminate someone else in the team who never made it past the first selection because when isagi eliminated kira in canon it gave him that satisfaction of elimination someone stronger and started to develop his ego and now you’ve given that whole experience to kira im hopeing in the future you make isagi super selfish or something because so far his just been passive even with the new personality

Shouldn’t igarahi have the ball since his ranked 300 in pretty sure who ever Is the worse player gets the ball?

Other then a bit more descriptive writing on who the main personality is and if it’s isagi a bit more of a reaction out of him because essentially he just got new memories from Luke plus a system but hasn’t really reacted to it just glanced over it making it seem like it not really a big deal in stead of making him go straight into blue lock you should’ve made a chapter of him trying to understand what happened and why he got the system also did he receive memories from Luke like the future or anything containing blue lock?

What’s the point in this like character if he doesn’t know anything at all or has taken over Isagi body other then give isagi a system that in theory be making home freak out just wondering if you can expand on this since you haven’t given much info towards it

Are you on about that she was willing to move to America before he said Rachel’s name because if you are then your wrong because she was willingly going to move she gave Ross a ultimatum saying that there relationship won’t work unless you do as I say basically

Don’t worry to much about it everyone makes mistakes your story’s still enjoyable 👍🏻