Lovidar5

иносказательно можно и так сказать. А так- "Рождение новой зари"- это эпос, записанный выжившими участниками Великой Межзвездной Войны и Исхода.

да, некоторым образом)

Yes, I like this book, otherwise I wouldn't write it :) At the same time, I am aware of her shortcomings and understand that she does not deserve the highest evaluation in everything. And therefore- 4.0. It will be fair. I appreciated myself, now I'm waiting for your feedback :))

I see. It took me a while to realize that your book was written in the style of a novelized video game. We call this genre "lit-rpg", a literary role-playing game. At first I thought it was an effect bestowed on Erik by the Weavers of Fate.

The combat specialization that the hero has chosen is very similar to the monk from the DnD 3-Icewind Dale 2 or NWN-based games.

I've read a few chapters. Vikings, Vikings, Vikings... It was as if I found myself in a global modification of the Skyrim video game. Moreover, the book is compiled as a report on the actions in a video game. Since I'm a fan of classical genres, it confuses me a little, but you can get used to it. In general, not bad. The world is strict, epic and gloomy, all the heroes are in their places, the main character Erik has simple and understandable goals, he does not rush to save the world like a comic book hero, but strives to achieve very specific goals. Alas, the motivation of the higher forces that brought the protagonist back to life remains unclear. Perhaps this will be explained in later chapters. The narration is good - the author's language is simple, concise and clear, you will not fall asleep while reading.

Eric is brutal as a rock in the middle of a storm and elegant as a rhinoceros knocking down a tree. The Weavers of Fate knew who to bet on. However, it is not yet clear why they needed it.

here Erik became like a typical MMA fighter :)

Oh, he should have taken a spear and learned to ride :) But a magic boxer is also not bad. A weapon that cannot be lost, cannot be taken away, and that is always with you.

Useful practice. But is the old butler a reliable defender? Even in a well-protected home location.