Rhys_Kefechek

And that's a banging beginning. I really loved, live for it. But the trauma really hit me hard. Well, if it gives depth to the character, I understand. You really brought out the worst out of people and made it your weapon. The second chapter was really powerful, applause for that. Descriptions and characters really made it worthwhile, I'm glad I picked it up on recommendation. It's a work in its infancy, but lots of potential here, and I won't hesitate to give it all 5 stars. Characters are relatable and 3-dimensional, something you've been carrying from your rookie days, story development is great, no hitches anywhere, and I'm nitpicky. World background has given us just enough satiate some curiosity, I really want to know more, so I will be patiently waiting for you to write more. I'm ''hooked.''

crazy moose

I love carrots

Where did you get the ideas for the names though?

Bookworms in the house, gather! Or are you referencing ORV here? Hmm ? HMMMMM?

Wow, too much too soon bruh

Amen

I wanna cuddle with Zeyu

NO noonooonononoononononononononono

I wanna vomit