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Jheydi32710dBalas DThornLike FR. Even though it's good but it feels bland to read every single repeating dialogues...
"But it feels good, doesn't it?" I said, thrusting deeper. "You like the pain. You like feeling my cock inside you, filling you up, such a kinky whore."- Jheydi32713dBerkomentar
Was this Fic more focus to football I guess?
Hopefully I'll be able to shoehorn in some good and fresh content, and, of course, more football! Yes, football. Checkmate, Americans! - Jheydi32713dBerkomentar
Bruh FR.. I don't know how I dropped the p*rnhwa but his reactions seems weird and unbearable at the same time. .
Also, I was thinking of giving Jair an OC body instead of Dae Ho's. (For some reason just looking at Dae Ho kind of pisses me off and makes want to punch the air.) But! Doing that would require more groundwork. - Jheydi32713dBerkomentar
What about My landlady Noona? Well...
Is there anything you'd like me to add? (Please don't ask me do add more p*rnhwas unless it's an overall short one - I've had people ask me to read Circles, but it's damn over 150 chapters long, and I don't have time to read it, make a detailed outline of each girl's personality, and incorporate it in the story.) - Jheydi32722dBerkomentarHer heart fluttered at the thought of him loving her romantically and she couldn't help but smile 'Oh, the butterflies in my stomach are flapping their wings...'
- Jheydi32723dBalas Akkuzz_69
Can you minimize this author ?. Was it necessary to use this exclamation marks every time they Explain something?.. Can they be more calm and collected?....
"Oh? So, those who have special physiques can see other's special physiques?!" Zhao Tian asked in amusement and Xia Shenyi replied shaking her head "No, No... I found yours because I have a physique that could detect if others have rare physiques." - Jheydi32723dBerkomentar
Kazuma is proud:
Hearing her teasing, Zhao Tian spoke "You want me to punch you again?" - Jheydi32723dBerkomentar"And that's when I got this pendant... I got really curious, because this pendant may belong to the old war which shook the whole realm. And while researching, I suddenly got sucked into it and since then I was living here."
- Jheydi32723dBalas Akkuzz_69
Well I hope it's not overuse cause I'm not used to read mtl novels... It always makes me think every time why would there an Exclamation mark every time they talk or in every grammar? Are they retard?. good chapter BTW
The woman shook her head helplessly and walked near to the bed "Tian'er!" she softly called looking at the white-haired young man. - Jheydi32723dBerkomentarAs Zhao Ying was wearing half pants, Zhao Tian grabbed her bare thighs "Yeah, yeah... i know." His finger gently pressed into the softness of her thighs, while the motion caused her breasts to lightly brush against his back.
- Jheydi32723dBalas Akkuzz_69*tap* At this time, another woman entered the room "Ying'er, how many times have I told you not to disturb Tian'er?" she asked in a soft tone looking at Zhao Ying riding on top of Zhao Tian while he was exercising.
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"!" author do you think she's talking softly if you use this mark?.. Hmmm
The woman shook her head helplessly and walked near to the bed "Tian'er!" she softly called looking at the white-haired young man. - Jheydi32724dBalas Melon_daomaster_9
Soo. .. Based on the synopsis, is this a plot wheres MC thinks whit his d*ck first, second and third before UISNG his brain??.. Was MC stealing others wives (even though they're already happy but still wants to steal them just like a trophy of just to satisfy his d*ck? ).. Was this another Pokémon harem?.. Wish fulfilments?. .If it is , well not my cup of tea. So tired and boring to read with this kind of not executed well stories(specially harem novels if it's not written well) nowadays...
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See.. This kind of MC mindset sucks.. Sti haven't move on..
'Fuck,' looking at Tsubasa's face, I felt a pang of guilt in my heart. Had I truly not moved on? Am I really considering killing this poor girl because of someone that I've not seen for millions of years? - Jheydi32729dBalas FinnsRevenge
- Jheydi32729dBalas Dreyerboys
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No morning BJ?
"Good morning, my baby," she yawned and stretched, as she held her arms up at me as if calling a little child to embrace. I fell into her arms, embracing her tightly as I placed a kiss on her nape. - Jheydi3271mthBerkomentar
Dang author you did it again with this fic. Can you translate better.. I Mean. . Why would you mention his name or complete name every sing time there's a paragraph or narrating????.. Like bruh aren't you not irritated?.. It's getting to the point we're its hord for a reader to continue to read this.. Specially how this becoming more chaotic that the Other fic.. I think the other Hentai fic is much better than this... Like bruh... I've read soo many fic but this is a bit worse.. Can't continue reading this.. Too much Grammar mistakes from the first chapter.. I think the only better translated one is the Synopsis.. But this chapters?.. Bruh author haven't you use a grammarly or qullbot to make the grammar better??..... It's free BTW...
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