Khaled_Azzam

I agree Daphne would be the most fitting female lead in this fanfic. And Plz for the love of God don't make it a harem, Since in most cases it ruins the story(unless its done right which it rarely does).

I have to disagree with you there. I think the character of Daphne that you wrote is great, sure it could be better but it's much better than many fanfics that I've seen. I Personally don't think you need to edit the last chapters just change her a bit moving forward and it'd be alright. But perhaps there's something I'm not seeing. Anyways, do what you feel is right for the story, as its still one of my favourites. Though I hope for more updates 😅.

This is one of the best fanfiction ever. I know you're doing it for fun and not following a strict schedule in uploading. But I hope that you continue this fanfic till the end and upload a bit more consistently, because this fanfiction really deserves more chapters. Thank you so much for producing such amazing work❤.

I will not go into specific story details to avoid spoilers but these are my thoughts. This is a great novel/fanfic. The MCs character is a bit dark but super interesting . And the Wizerding world characters are interesting and kind of similar to the source books. I've seen some Harry Potter fan fiction that depict Harry potter either as an evil asshole or subservient servant or as an extremely forgettable side character but its not that case in this fanfic its actually close to harrys character in the books. Moreover, this is one of the few fanics in which the MC doesn't know the entire plot of HP but knows enough that its still interesting and sometimes better than knowing the entire plot. The new characters and side of the wizerding world that appears here is amazing and interesting. There is a bit of forced mystery that appears here which makes it kind of frustrating. Now I don't have an issue with there being a mystery it makes the story interesting but sometimes the mystery is a but forced thus frustrating the reader. Overall, I love this novel and I hope it continues for a long time. Big thanks to the author for such an amazing fanfic.

This is a great novel with alot of potential, the MC actions and character are enjoyable to read. Moreover, the interaction with other characters is interesting, though the system may not be my favourite type but its still great and offers alot of adventure and fun. I hope you can continue with this fanfic and take it to heights that it can reach. Thank you Author for what you've published till now❤.

I really enjoyed this novel, I found it amazing. Now is it perfect, no. but nothing is. There will always be parts that could be improved but overall its a fun read and an interesting story. My recommendation is not to judge it only on a couple of chapter because it gets better as you go on. This type of novel might not be everyone's cup of tea but its mine and I love it. If you like a demonic yet noble character who prefers keeping a low profile and a slight comedy in the story. Then this is the story for you. Thank you Author for this Great novel ❤.

I really enjoy this story. Please don't drop it and continue it. I appreciate your work and thank you for this novel

This novel is amazing plz author continue it if anyone has recommended for novels similar to this or found chapter for this novel that extend beyond 150 plz recommend

This is such a great novel. I am a huge fan of your work whether its in HOD or this. I know most of your focus is currently on HOD. But please don't abandon this novel since its amazing. I really hope you can consistently put more chapters for this novel. Thank you for the amazing work.

Its a Great novel, if you haven't read it yet Read it. Author, if you are seeing this please continue this novel, because its really great and thank you for the work you produced till now.