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Lol😆, how can cat videos restore our faith in humanity?

Tf is a heart-shaped pussy? Does that mean she's so loose that her cunt became heart-shaped?

Come on, guys, it's a fkn lizard; stop being horny.

Lmao😆, other Chinese fanfiction MCs don't even have a Japanese name like that. I'm surprised it isn't Uchiha Feng or Uchiha Chaoxieng or something, lol.

It's pretty understandable. The author doesn't want to make the MC too OP. We all know giving the MC free NORMAL and CLEAN clothes are going overboard that would disrupt the flow of fate of the world he is in. Besides, wearing hospital gowns makes the MC look cooler and not like a mentally disabled person that escaped the mental hospital when the outbreak started, definitely not.

I didn't really mention her since you wouldn't add her to the harem...right?

4 good women? Imo, the only pretty women there are Mirage, Helen, and Violet. Who's the 4th one? Please don't tell me it's Jack's babysitter.

Oh, lmao. Seems like I accidentally skipped the chapter.

What did Max do to her? Was it mentioned and I just forgot or something?

Like I said before, I'll give another review when the fix progresses, so here I am. Writing Quality - 5/5 Grammar's good like what I said in my 1st review. Also, the author writes the POV of other characters and not just the protagonist's which I liked. Story Development - 4/5 I won't go into detail, but I'm liking where it's going after I posted my first review. Character Design - 3/5 Nothing changed. Updating Stability - 3/5 2 chaps a week is alright, I guess. World Background - 3/5 I was expecting a pure DAL story with the MC just going around other universes to go sightseeing or something. What made me rate it lower than my 1st review was the author added FGO elements, which was for me, unnecessary. The MC's going to other worlds anyway, what's the point of adding FGO elements? Could have just made him go to Nasuverse or smth. Overall, the fic's good. Sadly, I'll be ending my journey here. Adding in unnecessary stuff like fgo elements didn't fit well with me. Don't get me wrong, the fate series is one of my favorites, but I expected a pure DAL fic. In the future, I won't even be surprised if you write some bs like 'Since servants in fate are basically spirits turned into familiars, couldn't the MC make spirits like Tohka or Kurumi his servants?' or something like that.