Friendly_Immortal

There're many plot holes all around the novel, mc age is constantly changing from being a 5 year old in first chapter to being a 12 year old and then 13 year old in some. Mc doesn't do anything instead to just thinking about the naruto real timeline and in novel he speak as if he's a hardworker and having a mentality of woman only slow me down even when all he's power comes from system. Mc doesn't use he's mind many times he directly suppressed hyuga clan for saving neji father and then he directly does to itachi giving him his idea of saving uchiha clan instead of going to fugaku the clan leader. While fighting itachi he calls Hanzo a loser even when he's just too overpowered being a leader of a village and only lost to sage eyes while being too old. Timeline is all messed up as hinata behaves differently even when being shy she would at least thank him instead to just running away from him.

He even spoke about Hanzo being just a loser, that guy was literally a God of war even without his Poisons, he's mastery of battles and close combat techniques and awareness is off the chats that he can even beat haru(mc) even if he has a large chakra on which he literally has no control and wood release also was just obtained that same day??

WtH mc gone mad and start spouting nonsense?? Then he was behaving as if he was working hard and woman makes him slow but all his rewards comes from system not from hardwork?? He's talking to itachi instead of he's father fugaku being clan leader. Mc literally didn't have to do anything but he still going out of the way to talk to itachi leaving soon many plot holes and contradicting he's old comments of not getting into too much trouble. He has became too much arrogant just after receiving wood release to even suppress hyuga clan?? No brain all brawl and he was talking about how he'll have to use he's intelligence if he was reincarnated in Hunter x Hunter Or other anime.

I hate this type of mentality, if a woman really slowdown your speed of drawing sword than maybe you're way too weak in handling the sword( third leg) it's better to give up on that too.

Damiyo family has always been related to senju family but in this novel human emperor of fire nation or damiyo is of sarutobi clan idk how?? Please fix the issues which has been made in other raw novels.

Update please

KNOCK KNOCK!! .....SHIELD HERE 😂😂😂 You are an unstable factor in our society work for shield or became our enemy!!

I get it but if your reading a fan fiction at the very least you aspect the Mc to be the main character in some sense?? Outsider Resolve?? it's more like getting beaten till mc fall in the dark side.....

idk how people are even interested in these things... NTR should only happen when other person is very bad or abusive but if there's no plot regarding this then it's totally betrayed and treacherous behavior, both of the parties involved should be punished.