I hope it was constructive and not upsetting! I loved this work and will absolutely follow anything else you write. This was excellent author, particularly considering it was your first work in English. Thank you so much!

Pros: - This story is so much fun. Quick-paced and full of sly humor, it keeps you going to the next chapter. - Characters are very well realized, flawed, and interesting - Though there are a lot of clichés, the author plays with enough expectations to keep things interesting and surprising Cons: - This is a great story that is in desperate need of an editor. If you are easily distracted by spelling or grammar mistakes, you need to adjust your expectations or walk away. - Though I appreciate the fast pace, there are definitely some plot holes and some events that should have been fleshed out a bit more Overall, I highly recommend this to anyone who has a good sense of humor and a sense of the ridiculous. I smiled through most of this book and found myself obsessively moving to the next chapter. Though the story isn't perfect, you won't regret picking it up!

I hope we get to see more of his mother. It's nice to know someone has always loved Killian. I'm curious why she married the count to begin with. She's beautiful and rich - she could have done better! Thanks for the new chapter!

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