Not gonna lay good point.

Yeah who want to vulpix if you can have growthlie ??

No problem take your time.

I CAN ONLY SAY THIS IS THE GREATEST POKEMON NOVEL RIGHT NOW. The story his incredible wow , I want more , Congrat to the Author his story his fantastic

Great chapters💯🔥

I like the story but tray to make narrative a little faster like don't focus on to much on the current protagonist Rilus , the advantage that you have is that you story is focus on a Dinasty, because from the look , we will be with the young lord for a long time. But is still a Ok chapter 6 out of 10

Great buildup I want to see what will happend in the end 💯 🔥 🔥

Great story💯

The story as potential I really like that the story as 2 protagonist with different personality, I puted only 3 star in updating stability because I don't know if the story we will drop or not , I think that this story can be one of the best on the website and hispotential and the lore is 💯 for now hope to read more of it. I have high up . The author is talented and his doing a fantastic job.

Is a good story I hope for more

Overlord rip off 💯 for now. At least the autor took from a good one.

I agree is we are waiting 30 + plus chapter fpr Uquiora , how much will he taks for the others, before seing Madara and the others will be in chapter 500+ , is good to not showing them imidietly but at lest you have to sprinkle one of them at lest some time.

Great story

The writing can be improved but the story is good and the development is improving I would like to see a another character beside Hasirama, like Madara, Aizen , Escanor and other

The story is great and I like the world bulding and the strategy conquest I have great expectation . For the 140 words yghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh jjhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhh uhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjkkjjjjjjkjjj hhhe hehhehe ehwhhwhehwhe uwhwhwhwhwhw whhwhwhwhwhwhw uwuuuwuwuwuujwj whwhjwhwhw wuwjhwh wjwhhhwhw whwhhwbw wjwjjwwjhw hshehwh wuwh u wue uwbw Okv OkOk Ok Okjujhjjj uuujjjjjj uuj uuuh yhhh hhhhhh uhhh uhhh uhh uhhh uhhh uuhh hyyh uuhh uhhhh hhjhh uhhhh hhhh ujhh jjjj uuhhbuhh huhh hhhj uuhjjbb jjj

For now let enjoy the story, whi care about the power scaling ( if it doesn't completely make senses)

How can you have character like Madara , Escanor and Urik and still having a boring story, bro do a time skip or something because if not you will lose your audience😓.

Bro How many departments The Fortis Kingdom have ?? Is like 4 chapter mentioning departments

because is my book :) , No shame 😏loooooooooooooiioooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooioooooooooooooooooooooooooooooòòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiioooooooooooooooooooooooiioooooooooooooooioiiiiiiioiiiiooool

Bro I wanted Will vs Colt not June you should had focus on that