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nani?

one day mc says its been few weeks since he came to this world next week he days few months next day he says 6 months next day he says 1 year ...................................................................

108 chapters deep everything is good and all but one is not here is that DEPTH yeah the novel has not enough depth to its stories telling hope its gets better with time

1 good start but got worst with time 2 i think that author took break between or have memory loss 3 romance is very minimum 4 some important characters are forgotten 5 he rushed the story towards the end

he is your typical jap beta and he is stupid _______________________________________________________________________________________________

no they are stuck in the game and the gov bans the vr games so that no more people get stuck in game i i remember correctly around 500k people are stuck in this game and they are decreasing cause they are dying

can any body tell me why he holds aria's hand instead of aurora in ch 117 when sea king asks Zach to marry her daughter......................

but his reply was good

this novel deserves all the hype and rating this is definitely worth reading everything about this novel is good except for updates first about this novel main character is op and very much talented its a harem done better its has a cultivation world and real world also have cultivators system is explained and how it came to be world building is done good mc will behave like jap beta but he will have character dev as story progress one of the best char dev ever seen one thing i dont like is that he has no sense of urgency and makes no plans and future planning but now he starting to show some good traits but two things i was most looking forward to was 1 how he his character developement in terms of relationships go that author did very good 2 how he changes from goody two shoes to killing people left and right without any remorse and affecting his mentality, this author could have done better and 1 more thing is that author could have handled his memories well and show us more of his past and how its affects him in this life which could have been done in a better way but i understand that that way this novel will become too long but author should try to write his past life memories part better

i try to be very unbiased in my reviews and dont usually write reviews but i have to do this for my fellow daoists dont read this chaotic scripture it you will lose your brain cells and will face heart demons its even worse than the demonic scripture known as mtl if u still want to enter this chaotic cultivation path then dont blame me after you get your cultivation crippled