Why do you say so?

What do you mean by this statement?

How did you get here so quickly in minutes? Are you reading through the chapters one after the other, or are you skipping chapters?

No, you're getting it all wrong, I am not writing these scenes to milk my readers of coins, I am writing them 'cause I don't want to skip them. So his sister's graduation ceremony doesn't add anything to the story? He'll get to his teenage age before chapter 200. And he isn't seven years old anymore in this chap, he's 8 years and some months old.

Bro, talk to me, what do you want me to do? You trashed my novel without reading much. Everyone and their different taste of novels. Why this trashing?

Why do you say so?

I can tell you are an avid reader of webnovels, it's evident from your comments. Well, there is always room for improvement, we keep improving everyday, we learn everyday. So.

I understand what you mean, but what has been done has been done, I can't change it, but I've learned though. Now, I have some questions to ask. Apart from the ranking system, are you enjoying the book as a whole? And do you think the bad power ranking system is enough to make this book flop? You answers pls.

This is the real ranking system for my novel. I chose to make mine unique, anything wrong with that? Did it kill the book completely?

So, you wanted him to die?

No, he wouldn't bang guys, this is no BL book. He would bang girls to become stronger with the help of his system at the right time. Note, the R18 chaps wouldn't be starting anytime soon 'cause the MC hasn't gotten to the age to start screwing girls. He would start when he gets to his teenage age, that's when he'll start completing main quests. Pls, I'll really like it if you can be supporting this book with your power stones, that's what would help the book go far and also motivate the author. Up to what chap have you read up?

Yeah, I am gonna write more, next chapter would drop tomorrow, daily updates. Hope you'll support this novel.

I don't understand your statement, can you rephrase it?

Author here. Decided to write this after a month of posting 31 chapters. After reading the synopsis of this book, you should have known what the storyline would be like, or maybe you have a clue. If you enjoy what you're reading, try to support the author with your power stones, golden tickets, send gifts, and so on. If you have any questions about the book, don't hesitate to ask. Author out.

Romance.

Keep reading, you'll find out soon. And since I didn't add harem to the tag, then the MC would most likely have one love interest. But who knows, things might change, it's based on a probability though. I'll also appreciate it if you can support with your power stones, it does a lot to the author.

All I can say is it's based on a probability. That would be determined as the story unfolds.

How?

How? Tell me, in what way? Is my grammar bad?

Thanks for the constructive and detailed review, I like the fact that you mentioned the pros and cons of the novel. All I can say is that I'll try to improve myself as an author and my writing. Thanks for the review once again.