DaoistywHEoI

you just translated the grammar ,I find the mc still the same chi***e generic shi**y loser , coercing women while miraculously somehow they don't feel resentful , while you say you you put in lot of effort I don't see any atleast make some changes in the story even the name is generic Chinese name lynn, well this is my honest opinion

simply behaving like he has stick up his a**

wishy washy protagonist and direction the story goes is boring

it's a shi**y country

+1

minf?

how can kagaya tell they are talented before training them so i think it's a coincidence

all of you are like little bi***es the author is just being cynical

very bad grammar and spelling , overall okay

*incest