Quality_Searcher

It was written some lines before.

That's a good idea. I may take it at some point in the story

I appreciate your idea, and I'm always open to suggestions from my readers. Still, I can't use your idea for several reasons. The clearest and most direct is that, as you can see in the gif, this ability would fall more into the Manipulation and Enhancement categories, not the Specialization one. That's why I say that creating skills for this category is fishy.

It's the canon description of the creature. Somehow, it had to be alive in that state. It's manga after all

That's the point. Because he has a great innate talent, they say he's a monster.

Date is based in the 2011 anime adaptation. Doesn't make any difference

It's a shame. I really liked your fanfic and the way you developed the mc.

Have you changed the beast name?

There isn't plot load, and the creature (God) doesn't appear for the moment.

I know Chapter 1 may give a concrete impression, but it's only to introduce the character's origin, and it's the one that's least altered from the original. Subsequent chapters are more elaborate and closer to canon. I'd like you to give it another try with chapter 2 before making a final decision. It's your decision whether you do it or not though.