A shy introvert who loves anime, watching k-dramas, and reading webtoons~! I love writing fanfics and recently my own novels. Though I still have a long way go, please support me and my stories~!
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Go get it boy!😂😂😂🥵🥵
My exact thoughts😂😂😂
He so freaking adorable😂😂😂😂
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
Interesting story and love your take on Greek mythology! For anyone who loves a good revenge story and Greek gods. This is a story you may want to try out. There are some mistakes. Like I would suggest spacing out your paragraphs and there were bits that were slightly confusing. But nothing to kick up big fuss. Good job and keep up the great work author-sama!😊😊😊😊😊
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So the writing is great and the story seems interesting and well thought out. For those who loves crime story, with a bit of a dark edge this will definitely be for you!😊
Not bad! There ’s only 2 chapters so I can’t judge much. I would say try to add more dialogue and action to really grab the reader’s attention. The grammar could also used some work. The MC seem decent so far. In all, not so bad.
Yes! I’m on discord. Tododeku18#9376
A interesting read for those of you who like action and dungeons. Writing could use some work. Can definitely tell the author is anime fan which I respect. While there is areas for improvement like better sentence structure and making the words flow smoothly. I see potential in this work and will be rooting for the author!😊👍