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Voidz_Zero

Voidz_Zero

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2021-09-26 BergabungGlobal
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero7h
    Berkomentar

    His not hiss

    Her brain matter overflowed in hiss mouth, and a sense of elation washed over him. He had always been vengeful, and he remembered her mocking words vividly.
    Villain: Ultimate Mutation System in the Alternate World
    perkotaan · InnocentFox
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero7h
    Berkomentar

    Shot not shots

    This exposed him to be shots by the guards.
    Villain: Ultimate Mutation System in the Alternate World
    perkotaan · InnocentFox
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero8h
    Berkomentar

    Mistake here

    Nevertheless, Banda notice a pool of blood at one corner, and then sighs that they was at least another person that had pulled a body away. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero8h
    Berkomentar

    There instead of they

    They made it to the end of the cave. However, apart from a headless corpse that resembled the Bandit boss, they was no one else. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero8h
    Balas Wahi

    Did u fix most of the Grammy and spelling mistakes? I’ve been reading and I’ve encountered lots of them in the past. Is your writing good enough for there to not be anymore mistakes of that sort?

    Cursed Immortality
    Fantasi · Wahi
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero22h
    Balas Red_dragon
    False Orb trembled violently as if trying to break free of Adam's grip. But, as it did so, the False Orb flew out of Adam's hand in a blue flash, entering his chest and heading straight for the Evolution Tree.
    Endless Evolution: Last Star
    Fantasi · Arlemit
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero22h
    Balas
    False Orb trembled violently as if trying to break free of Adam's grip. But, as it did so, the False Orb flew out of Adam's hand in a blue flash, entering his chest and heading straight for the Evolution Tree.
    Endless Evolution: Last Star
    Fantasi · Arlemit
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero1d
    Berkomentar

    Great chapter! Keep it up

    Ch 344 Chapter 343: Secrets of Aethel Part 8
    King Of Limbo
    Fantasi · God_Of_Brutality
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero1d
    Berkomentar

    Mistake here, do u mean to say feeling or what u wrote aeelings

    Trutet couldn't help but gulp nervously as aeeling of nervousness overwhelmed him, but he didn't stop there as he was cautiously stepping back and trying to get closer to a tree. 
    King Of Limbo
    Fantasi · God_Of_Brutality
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero1d
    Berkomentar

    Great chapter!

    Ch 342 Chapter 341: Secrets Of Aethel Part 6
    King Of Limbo
    Fantasi · God_Of_Brutality
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    There instead of they

    They were heads on the walls, well preserved with the skin, and even eyes, nose, mouth and ears. Some of these heads had scars on their faces. Obviously, they had fought and struggled before their lives were taken from them. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    Only 1 done not 2

    The sight of it all made him sigh in regret. After all, he had been capable of doing something, but he had done done nothing. Right now, he was questioning the decision he made. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    Shot not shut

    However, deep within the night, Dylan's eyes shut open. And while he sneaked out of the temporarily made camp, Banda watched him from within the darkness as Dylan placed his hoodie and rushed into the night. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
    detail
  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    Hated before humans

    Humans in a Beast country would not be a funny thing. They were many beast people that humans just as much as humans hated them. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    As not has

    Once through the border, Captain timi and the others had done has they were instructed to do. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    They instead of these

    These were the tools for his punishment. Anyone that touched his property had to receive the wrath of his judgement. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    Mistake here. Wiping? U mean whimpering

    He exchanged subtle eye contacts with the others. All of them remained silent, and some even faked wiping. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    There instead of they

    They are two major rivers that run through the Beast nation. these rivers are responsible for all the smaller rivers. At the same time, they are six known springs. These shall be our point of contact for our mission."
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    Ye instead yea

    Chiron shook his head, "Oh yea of little faith." Chiron pointed to the border of the beast Kingdom leading to the ocean. 
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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  • Voidz_Zero
    Voidz_Zero2d
    Berkomentar

    The before strongest

    Strongest becomes ruler. Now, let me ask you. which part do you think we will take out with the easiest of means in the quickest of time to actually end a nation, while at the same time ensuring that a point is made for their sin of touching my sister?"
    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasi · Dere_Isaac
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