mr_iceman

the novel is not bad but not good either because the lines are stretched to much the chapter are short but the idea of the system is good and most important thing is misspelling of name like ravan is spelled as ravana and dev is spelled as Deva this is important as the author doesn't know this may be the author is copy pasting this story from chat gpt and the author locked the chapters at 19 which is way to early and we don't even have time to connect with character and even in those 19 chapter half of those is about "the silver light shine upon the sword as he killed danvas "and things like this which is just lazy writing not worth it unless author give us more time to connect with character or upgrade his writing and storytelling skills because chat gpt is not good because the way it is written is way to cring ok that all i am telling you all this to help you be better version of your previous self

it seems I have ascended cause i can know mtl from title and cover

bro why did you stop updating and the story is so slow it been 25 chapter but he is still not on the main story and why are you still showing us his past ._ . it not necessary just get to the main

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lol can't stop laughing 🤣😂🤣🤣

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remind of .so what if I am a sider