Happy birthday and thanks for the chapter . In my opinion your story is very good (a little fast in overall pace and little simple in side characters emotions and backgrounds but still very good ) As for suggestions I think you can use other time travel novels as an inspiration for future characters and events Best wishes for you and next chapter for us

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Stag king’s part in his blood is boiling a f*** and then a fight with promise of more fight to come

Thanks for the chapter

This hightower queen can only give birth to idiot fools in any time line

I don’t think so ,they will invite him to late night parties and never let him go after the first night because this is dorne we are talking about

Now the thunder king is regretting his law about godly parent and their child

Welcome back

A man in need a family man indeed

That’s beautifully executed plan and this was very good chapter ,thank you very much

It begins with dancing and end in bedding, I wonder if it was thing in old world too (Thanks for the chapter )

He came with fire in dramatic entrance

Thanks for the chapter (and restarting from backside )

As joke he should have made odin the allfather’s tree in middle of the filds

It is both joyful and sad to see this book ending

He is collecting the granddaughter and the daughters and sisters in one wedding i call him the lucky ba**** but he has the fates on his side

Not sure that it will change the results but another dragon might be better choice , a younger ,faster and less grumpy dragon

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter