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Slender_04754 days ago
Balas Daoist708194
Yes
'Hey, El, what if I show them my face? What's the chance that they might run away after recognizing me?' I asked, keeping an eye on them.
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Slender_04757 days ago
Balas Wacher
😅
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Slender_047510 days ago
Balas Primordial_VoidFox
He was dope/cool
Those same red lasers came from a much larger ship that looked like a larger version of the Spartan Laser weapon from Halo and with red spheres, however this was the ship known as the Chimerian Hammer, feared throughout the universe due to its infamous captain.
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Slender_047510 days ago
Balas Primordial_VoidFox
😂👍
Unfortunately, I still wasn't a walking Jojo reference of a bodybuilder kid nor could I confirm exactly how my mana had improved my intellect, probably since my cognitive functions had been preserved from my past life and there wasn't really anything close to a mental challenge for me yet.
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Slender_047510 days ago
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😂👍
Unfortunately, I still wasn't a walking Jojo reference of a bodybuilder kid nor could I confirm exactly how my mana had improved my intellect, probably since my cognitive functions had been preserved from my past life and there wasn't really anything close to a mental challenge for me yet.
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Slender_047511 days ago
Balas Daichi_TBR193
That's an amazing idea I'll share my other Idea too *lesser Dragon *Common Dragon *Higher Dragon (something like that) *Elder Dragon *Legendary Dragon *Ancient Dragon *Dragon God (¿)
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Slender_047511 days ago
Balas Daichi_TBR193
That's sounds pleasing can't wait
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Slender_047511 days ago
Balas Daichi_TBR193
Awesome 👍
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Slender_047512 days ago
Balas Daichi_TBR193
Will you did a good job in changing that part from the OG Also it's just a idea that came to me while reading this comment... Why not rank the Dragons that the Forever knights fought ...like: 1. Wrym (something like that) 2. Wyvern 3. Long 4 . Dragon 5. Dragon King 6. Dragon God It's just a simple idea though just wanted to share it ...just a small suggestion. I hope when you write your future chapters make a longer versions of Main Arc(s) & a bit slow paced like this Dagon one or others... This chapter felt a little bit fast paced ...well I know this Arc was not that important but I'm just saying it for the main ones Have an amazing Time Author 🤟
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Slender_047512 days ago
Balas Daichi_TBR193
Charmcaster- Hope & Hex- Wisdom amazing creativity their Author
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