an OC

And he got his powers back a couple of chapters later. If the Mc keeps on powering through every single villian then what is the point of it all. I have to keep saying it to everyone but here I go again If I want to create conflict then I'll have to make some changes here and there, I hate that trope too that is why I am trying my best to make the conflicts not last long. The only reason Peter got hurt in the Warmonger fight is because Iron man couldn't fire a unibeam.

The First 10 or so chapters were written as a hobby anything after that is fair game for criticism. I am too far gone to change the chapters to fit more correctly and your last point about uncle ben. WHO THE FUCK KNOWS HOW THE TIMELINE WORKS, THE ARGUMENT WAS DIFFERENT, THE TIMING WAS DIFFERENT THE ENEMIES UNCLE BEN FACED WERE DIFFERENT. HECK UNCLE BEN IS A SUPPOSED SECRET AGENT. PETER WAITER 20 MINUTES AS HE SEES UNCLE BEN LEAVE BECAUSE HE DID NOT THINK IT WOULD HAPPEN BECAUSE IT DIDN'T HAPPEN EXACTLY LIKE CANON.

Knowing one future is different from knowing all. You want him to make technology and patent it to earn money, he didn't have the starting capital for it and once he earned that he realised he wasn't in a hurry at least not until something major comes up. Making a company or product and selling it is a big thing for any teenager to do, it would be hard, you'll face resistance and it won't be done overnight. Any capital he earned has been put into buying a safe bet like the Stark shares which he knows will rise.

If I made it so that Peter is always on that Sigma male grind set then all I will have is a power scaling contest. if you didn't notice most villains he faced till now were dealt with easily. it was the slippery ones that he had to actually deal with. I would say he is making plans for every eventuality there is but I'm not showing all of that as It would feel boring to know what his plan is before the battle even starts.

yes

Too little time to do it.

Stane doesn't make his suit even in the movies, his scientists do it for him and Stark didn't even have a day after making mark 1 and flying it for the first time.

That is what I'm saying, in this universe Stane was already developing a suit for the military way before Tony even made the mark 1, the only flaw of the mech was that it didn't have a power source which was solved using a questionable source.

That's because this isn't made based on mark 1, this is a military project made to stop something far bigger and meaner than Spiderman

Yeah sure buddy, like I have a lot of time to review spam my fic. If you read at least 20 chapters then you can provide an accurate rating because as I have mentioned the earlier chapters were almost 1 and 1/2 years ago. You can hate all you want but don't go claiming review spam and all that retarded shit you racist fuck.

expect more of them for the first 10 or so chapters

Author making the new cover with as much effort as possible:

non harem

single

Not gonna happen brother, maybe as a small arc but probably not.

oh that's fine then, I thought you were asking if it was harem.

no

you have commented on almost every paragraph my dude.