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But, with MC's power, it can be solved with a 'flick' of the finger, right? It doesn't sound like a serious 'problem' but it can still be a good 'material' to develop the story. Problems not related to OP power: women. MC may have OP power, but is MC also OP when it comes to conquering women?
Stories about overpowered characters rarely center on the character themselves, but rather on how things around the character are affected by their presence. If the focus is on the character, what is focused on is rarely related to their powers such as : Shigeo Kayama/Mob with romance problems, Saitama with financial problems, Momonga/Ainz with misunderstanding problems.
Overall, nothing has changed. The author only replaced things that were not liked, even the SOL scenes were similar. I mean, Shushu's blackmail is invalid. Yuki and Akuma have very different position in MDF. Negotiation is done by two 'equal' parties while exploitation occurs because there is a 'significant' difference. Evidence and hostages are one way to improve 'position'. Shushu can exploit Yuki, but can only negotiate with Akuma.
Usually, the plot would bend reality in such a way that the Protagonist is always the champion, but ..... It was a strange feeling that made me want to laugh out loud, but it was a great relief. Finally, the Protagonist is not protected by the Author/Plot, dares to take the blame, and then uses 'himself' to confront the problem directly
Actually, I kind of hope you don't awaken the Great Sage's 'consciousness'. Great Sage is always with you. The Q&A feature is unnecessary because you control Great Sage perfectly. But the awakening of the 'consciousness' makes you lose control of the [Unique Skill: Great Sage] and let it be controlled by that 'consciousness'.
For example, emphasizing the ugliness of the OG Protagonist so that the crimes the MC commits against the OG Protagonist pale in comparison. “Kagaya was rude to me, so it was fine if I took his wife”, “Hashira was looking for trouble with me, so I taught them a lesson”. Not that Isao should stand by and be harassed, but hey, this is all a plot that you, the Author, created right? You can set up other plots without this conflict, right? Author = MC and MC = Author, so it's hard to see Isao as innocent in this incident. I'm talking in circles, this might not even be useful. I don't know, I'm just rambling.
“Reason justifies action.” Then came, “Punish crime with crime.” I quite agree with this. It's just that in practice, the crimes of others/enemies are used as 'excuses' to justify our crimes against them. Actually, from the reader's perspective, this is fine and even good. The ' enemy's crimes' will become the focus to channel the reader's negative emotions, then when the enemy gets a proper crime as punishment, the reader is relieved. But you're over-exploiting this.
I kind of forgot about GDK, what's up with Fanny? As far as I know, she's fine. Iirc, it's only her father who complicates her relationship with MC
The Honorable Young Master of the Dang-Ding-Dong Clan was passing through the city when the MC picked up a random stone on the side of the road that turned out to be a heavenly treasure.
The easiest way to make 'something/A' look good is to make 'something/B' look bad so that when compared, the results are clear. It appears that the Author is trying to demonize the Demon Slayer Corps. So I wonder, what will the MC achieve? Or maybe the Author is just offering a new perspective of the DSC.
Past MC: vowed never to be weak. Current MC: no, I will live a 'slice of life'. Hmm
'Feelings can be developed over time' can be translated as : “Plot-sama, Author-sama, please help me. I'm unable to conquer this woman~” Somehow, I can't get rid of this idea in my head ....
All of this can be summarized in one sentence, you know? The MC wakes up and looks around before muttering in an inaudible voice, “I can't believe that any of that is real.” After that, as the story progresses, you can start explaining about the system, about the current city/world, and various other nonsense. I want to insult you, but the closing words always remind me that this is a free novel. Sigh~
It is with a heavy heart that I say: There is no need to force yourself to create a harem.