Aizen_81

Who said that Itachi is a proud man?? He's just a traitor who thinks he's a hero

No, I haven't read it. What a stupid question

Bad narration as if the hero is telling his story in the past I did and I fought and then I took a shower Why is there no interaction like pov

The story was interesting at first, but in the later chapters it began to focus on very boring dialogues, such as the dialogue between the team of Orochimaru, Jiraiya and Tsunade, readers are not interested in cementing the relationship of MC with characters not in the story such as Nomad and Castos, and we do not care about the discussion of the Sand Village Senate Keep it brief. We don't watch anime we read so you have to shorten the sub-topics that mc is not a part of

The reason for low ratings is not that he is weak but stupid and puts himself in embarrassing situations he keeps complaining about being weak but he doesn't try to train he has a tenseigan and doesn't try to find out or train for it he just goes and takes a mission he knows what's going on and yet he risks his life for no benefit he just goes back to the village and continues His life always thought he wanted to steal a jutsu or do something for the future, but he goes to shiver and cry and gets close to death and then Jiraya or Orochimaru falls from the sky to save him

I don't understand why he explains and explains to the old man and why he even needs to make up a story. Is he afraid that he won't accept him? Just give him electric shocks and he won't ask again why he's looking for excuses.

Everyone has his assumptions that he stepped down from the position of Hokage for fear of death, just an assumption from you, the writer did not show us any reason or goal for Hiruzen's actions, even when he caused a disaster, he was not intentional, and in the end he died while protecting Konoha, this weakens your assumption that he is a coward, but Orochimaru himself admitted that if Hiruzen was 10 years younger than he won against him. This means that for the 10 years we watched him, he was a period of low strength and we can't judge him only from her.

I don't understand why he left his mother alive and now Madara loves his mother, is there a need to add this disgusting part I also don't understand why it's related to someone who is not related to him Are you born without a mother So you are looking for tenderness

The character of the hero is awful. He thanks and apologizes more than necessary. I also don't understand anything why he helps the two girls. I won't complain if he helps them without losing anything. But he humiliates himself and exposes himself to Freya with all submission and humiliation. I also don't like MC background. He is the son of a whore. The disaster is that his mother is alive

Yes, I agree with you that he is not strict and yet he is portrayed in fan fiction as a man hungry for power and willing to kill everyone to remain the Hokage.