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Dark_Soup

Dark_Soup

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2021-08-26 BergabungGlobal
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  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup12 days ago
    Diterbitkan

    I really like this, expanding the lore of fate and creating his own story. Very good! .........................................................................................................................

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup3 months ago
    Diterbitkan

    Super interesting Combo with shadow Slave with fate. I really want to interaction later in the story, if this fanfiction get that far! Overall, I cant wait to see how far this fanfiction can go!

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup4 months ago
    Diterbitkan

    One of the best fanfiction, where the Main Character doesnt get godlike power right as soon as it start! I enjoy it. Especially since it shows trial with crossovers which depending on what the author does, will allow us to see character development and other worlds system combining!

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup5 months ago
    Balas Kainedei

    An couple of complains made by the author is being expanded on the newer chapters such as exploring more of the author past. This is just letting potential readers know that some problem brought up within this comment is being worked on!

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup6 months ago
    Diterbitkan

    Really good, like one of the best characters interaction and drives I ever seen in fanfiction. I dont know how you do it but you did it! Yea it really good.

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup6 months ago
    Diterbitkan

    One of the more interesting fanfictions, I wish for more and more of this since it seems very interesting, however I wish for more interaction with the magical world of Marvel, but that doesnt subtract from the score

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup6 months ago
    Diterbitkan

    There not enough worm fanfiction on this platform! so keep up the good work on spreading the good stuff :) eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee(wordcount)

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup7 months ago
    Diterbitkan

    Uhhh.... It like the first chapter but just the introduction to the world is pretty good. I liked it. If it keeps up the same quality, and bring in unique ideas, I can see it as a really good fanfiction... a yea, that basically everything I got to say with the first chapter.

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup8 months ago
    Diterbitkan

    I enjoy these types of story's. It a slow-paced story, where the mc experiences what life is, instead of being an overpower machine without any emotions. The MC is enjoyable but I wish to see more thriving character interaction, while I wish the power to be explored some more.

  • Dark_Soup
    Dark_Soup9 months ago
    Diterbitkan

    This is one of the most creative DC fanfiction, that I ever seen. An android that acts like a android instead of a normal person in a suit is amazing. The interconflict of the android is sweet as well. Overall a well made story with only 9 chapters but hoping for more