GloryForAll

Gave me a headache trying to read. The story was just an incoherent mess with a large dose of cringe scattered throughout.

Not the worst, but also not the greatest. Reads like ChatGPT, so it gets fairly stale. The first 69 chapters are underwhelming and unneeded. Flashbacks would have been a better alternative. However, it doesn’t read like an MTL, and anything is better than reading MTLs. 3/5

Great Idea, but poorly executed. Could do a rewrite at some point.

Not much has made sense this far.

Why would there be two metrics for the same thing? Vitality correlates with health but health isn’t all that it consists of. The same basis is with INT. Mana tends to correlate with INT in cases mana/Energy is a concept within the story. However, Mana growth isn’t the only factor INT growth impacts.

There you go Intelligence. What is intelligence? The ability to apply and acquire knowledge. What is magic? Commonly seen as conceptual and/or mathematical understanding? Therefore, we find ourselves in a situation of poor world building by the author. If you don’t want to correlate Intelligence with what it is then don’t use it to define a metric. Name it Mana, Magic, Energy, or anything that relates to the unit of energy the individual possesses. Case #100 of why system based stories are just lazy projects.

What does INT stand for?

Yeah

This is one of the reasons a photographic memory is a crucial must in reincarnation tropes.

Is this fic going to follow the original timeline for its duration, or are you going to do some original post story development as well? Just wondering. Haven’t seen anyone not follow the plot in regards to Twilight.