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I doubt that this raw will be found but I can give you my personal favourite clone type novel. 无限分身：我在吞噬星空里无敌了 It's not completed yet but It's very good imo

Would certainly make it more interesting. doubt it though

as far as I can tell from the raws (来自星渊最新章节) this is essentially a "The Legendary Mechanic" copy in terms of world and starting premise. This is a great boon to me so I'm looking forward to this translation a whole bunch

read up to chapter 50 raws and the nationalism gets real bad. Every country except for China is barbaric and exploits its citizens while China is perfect and the government cares only about the health of the people.

Why is he so focused on the demonic sword? He knows literally nothing about what It'll give him yet he gives this random "demon" access to his memories. Memories are who we are, you'll forget grudges and knowledge. You'll forget who you are. Without more information on what memories will be taken and how they will be taken, this is a deal no one would accept. He has his minions, which is a far better investment then this.

This is a really solid novel! Hits all the right power leveling itches that you might have. 4 stars instead of 5 simply cause of the occasional cringe moments. Having the goddess act like she does and having the maid act as she does really reminds me of those terrible isekai anime with 20 dollar episode budgets.

6 chapters in It's pretty good! It suffers a bit from "plot luck" where just the thing the mc needs just happens to be given to him, and I don't think it needs that. Him receiving the spirit stone didn't need to happen this early. Beyond that tiny issue though, I really enjoy the novel. The system is fun and the world seems to be a tad different than other cultivation worlds which is almost always good. Keep it up Author!

raw 螳螂吞噬星空 Seems like a good read imo. asdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasasasadasasdasdasdaasda

athena can certainly help in a meaningful way.

If executed properly, this idea could become an incredible good novel. I'm unable to find the raw though so I'm not capable of finding out for sure. If anyone manages to find the raw, do please let me know what it is :)

Use your critical thinking abilities here my friend.

How could this talent be remotely the same rank as our mcs

It's entirely reasonable for people to not understand this since you've literally not explained it. We don't know much of anything about the world or its culture.

I don't understand the positive reviews on this novel. It's terrible. The mc has the brain of a 3-year-old. Instead of focusing on the tasks that allow him to summon literal gods, he trains his body under the training of his first god. You might think, "that's a pretty good idea", but no. The task is to build houses and the better and faster you build em the higher score you get. Despite this, he lets the god that has TELEKINESIS train him instead of building the houses in like a couple of hours.

This is dumb. There is no reason for him to be training like this. Just finish the task as fast as possible and get the rewards.

Maybe It's something similar to an hibachi restaurant

Hey Author! You said you were looking for feedback so I figured I'd give my 2 cents. This is all in good faith. The writing quality of this novel is not great. It reads very much like a shopping list of events rather than a story, which minimizes any emotions we're supposed to feel. The main thing that could be improved is how fast-paced everything is. For example, there's nothing being shown about the sister leaving her brother for the very first time to go to a sect. surely that'd be an emotional moment All that being said, however, I think you've got something special. Webnovel readers can often see past writing imperfections but when it comes to power systems or cheats, we're a very logical bunch. We want a cheat to be used effectively, we want our power systems consistent, and most importantly we want our cheats FUN. This is your best point, the system is very fun to read about which makes all the writing imperfections not really matter. I don't care if I don't have any attachments to the characters if the cheat is fun. Him creating these "clones" for lack of a better word and using them is super entertaining to read about. Writing skills can be improved with practice but coming up with a fun world/power system/cheat is something that a LOT of authors mess up and at least from this novel you've got that down pat.

It's incredibly similar sure, but it does pretty much everything better so I don't mind it. Copies are not new here so if they improve on the copied material then I'm all for it

This one you can just google translate to simplified Chinese and you'll find it. I don't have any better strategy than that and it only works on very few books